Today, in English, you are going to write the second part of the Build-Up.
Remember to improve your writing by:
a) including a sentence which starts with a prepositional phrase eg. Behind the stable door, Tim crouched listening intently.
b) including some effective speech: 1) Use precise verbs for 'said' 2) Add adverbs eg. affectionately 3) Add phrases starting with 'as' eg. as he smiled and 4) 5 pieces of punctuation.